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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-11-12 03:17 PM

North of You
barriers are down
I am slipping away
beyond
the instant replays
never looking back.

~~*~~

my emotions
like echoes
rebound
in this stillness

~~*~~

words
aren't enough
to massage
the will
that resides
in my darkness

~~*~~

the unspoken
mourns the missing
the blue
of your eyes

~~*~~

You are
an acquired taste
and I am hungry
for the unusual

~~*~~

I wait
to drink before you
wasting nothing
wanting more
than the blind can see

~~*~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2002-11-12 03:25 PM

you doodle well...fascinating feel to these

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-11-12 03:44 PM

There are some stunning and profound thoughts in here Maureen. Very touching
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-11-12 04:51 PM

Maureen, Every one is exceptional.
Enjoyed them all a great deal.
Some touching, some stunning, some too real.

Thanks for sharing your talent.

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-11-12 05:03 PM

You are
an acquired taste
and I am hungry
for the unusual

an interesting one... and while they are all good... this one strikes a personal chord with me for some reason...

I enjoyed

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-11-12 05:46 PM

thank you all for reading these doodlings today...
sometimes I have my shortcomings..and today was one of them..

and C for some reason my taste goes for the unusual...a learned response

M

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SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2002-11-12 06:18 PM

This is very well said. And, a wonderful poem.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-11-12 08:13 PM

(smiles) Oh Maureen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, every one of your small doodlings makes up a fine tapestry you always weave for us all, I love it! (kiss on cheek) Doodle on, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

8 posted 2002-11-12 08:22 PM

Thought and image provoking... Nicely done.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2002-11-12 10:46 PM

Very well done my friend...and thought provoking too. Enjoyed them all.

jwesley

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

10 posted 2002-11-13 12:27 PM

doodle on with the images

Balladeer

Administrator

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

11 posted 2002-11-13 12:29 PM

You use your noodle when you doodle...I like the whole kit-n-kaboodle!!

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

12 posted 2002-11-13 01:21 AM

M,
I hope there will be more doodles!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2002-11-13 08:10 AM

Sue, thanks just a few thoughts I couldn't make into one poem. *s
Thank you Noah

MarkV, I always think of the under 20 whenever you are around..but I usually am never at a loss for words, and to do 20 or under I have to control myself *s

jwesley, yes they were making me think thoughts I try not to have sometimes.

Thank You.

ecrivan

Balladeer, only you could come up with those rhymes

Thank you for reading.

Larry, I probably will do a few more since I can't seem to put a whole poem together right now... thank you

M

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

14 posted 2002-11-13 01:35 PM

Sometime when we restrict words
We say much more,
With these few words you say much
Enjoyed

Gloom

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

15 posted 2002-11-13 01:39 PM

Lovely doodles, Maureen...

~ hugs from a loving chipmunk friend

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

16 posted 2002-11-13 01:45 PM

I missed thanking you Martin..*s sorry...

PG..yes I am learning to speak less too

Hi Lyra, I am glad you made it back safely and enjoyed your fall trip
hugsss
M

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