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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2002-11-10 10:18 PM


Visions
at times eyes see
what really isn't there
deception within sight of reality
to believe what the mind
conceives beyond thoughts
truth of love with tangled ideas
bring you to angry visions
when all that finally becomes
the picture of friends


bernie


someone taught me that.....

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (11-10-2002 10:30 PM).]

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-11-10 10:37 PM


Glad I found this.  It struck me of jealousy...and then on the second read...it struck me of fantasy...
One in the same no doubt.  A double enjoyment. ThisDiamond

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2 posted 2002-11-10 10:58 PM


Bernie, I like this. It's very interesting and really makes the reader think. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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3 posted 2002-11-10 11:51 PM




(sigh) Oh Bernie, I think it takes us all a lot of time to discover that kind of reality, you speak with such wisdom, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bernie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-11-11 12:16 PM


I'm still thinking on this one. I'll be back.

                             Dawn

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