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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Exposed come...... I want to feel your laughter against my skin see the sun melt in your eyes when day is at end enjoy precious moments when my soul is exposed unlocking doors that before slammed tightly closed to truly know I have found a moment intertwined that others forever seek and never find I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (11-10-2002 03:57 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so precious, sweet friend, and know when one door closes another will open so let your loving heart go through and expose yourself, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...like a frame of film, capturing a moment that made it to print... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
GAWD, I love this and relate! Your style is always simple and elegant, yet intense and felt by the reader. Helen, I reiterate for the billionth time - get published dangit!   Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Helen, this is wonderful. I agree with the previous reply. I can see it, now. A tall, narrow booklet filled with all your talent..... I'd buy one Thanks, enjoyed. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Wow, like a carnation expressing marital bliss and purity. Thank you. etoodog |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"come...... I want to feel your laughter against my skin see the sun melt in your eyes" =============================== Beautiful Helen...a very special moment captured forever in time... ~Hugs~ ~Let your heart guide you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady More than talent It whispers gallant. Excellent. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, your talent simply oozes off these pages of blue !!!! Thanks for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! Such lovely thoughts, to find a relationship that was so wonderfully liberating and tittilating. Excellent feel to this piece. Not one extraneous word, you are so good at that. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, =================== I have found a moment intertwined that others forever seek and never find =================== A rare moment indeed written in rare form by a very special lady. You do this so well!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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