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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-11-09 07:35 PM





The Veteran

He took up rifle, musket balls
Took the pledge, answered call
For his land, right or wrong
Stemmed the tide, the day was long

God and Country, black and white
Fought from sunrise into blood’s night
Heard the screams, fell to rise
Wearied soldier of battled cries

~*~

World War I, then II, and more
Traveled far to Korean shore
Every man who lost his life
Left his family, left his wife

Every curse for whom we are
Why?  He had to travel far,
Into countries to help oppressed
To fight a war against protest

~*~

A world caught up in time and tide
Nation’s leaders took a side
Vietnam, oh, what a ride
Time to hear a Veteran’s side

Anger still shakes him deep
Nightmares still proclaim his sleep
He traveled so far to keep
Promises; his country weeps

For those who are lost and gone
His country, who went beyond
Will of men who went along
For a cause they thought was strong

He led teams who went to war
Tell him please, what he fought for
It's not too late to say "Thank You"
for God, Country, our red, white, and blue.




My thanks to all of the Veterans
who served their Country
Now, and then.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-09-2002 08:35 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
paladin
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1 posted 2002-11-09 08:13 PM


Thank you.This veteran salutes you.

paladin

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2 posted 2002-11-09 08:26 PM


We owe them a debt that we can never repay. This is a lovely tribute, Karilea.
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3 posted 2002-11-09 08:26 PM


Thank you for this Karilea....
It is much appreciated..
None of the vets should ever be forgotten.
Well said.
~Hugs~

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4 posted 2002-11-09 08:47 PM


As we get ready to mark another Remembrance Day in my country...this poem was very timely...each year the number of veterans gets smaller...will we remember when they are all gone?

...believe what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2002-11-09 09:27 PM


This is a wonderful tribute, Karilea. Veterans should never be forgotten.
Sunshine
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Thank you.  None of the days that take a moment to give respect to our military should be taken lightly.

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7 posted 2002-11-11 12:29 PM


This is most definitely a treasure to be kept and read each year at this time---lest we forget what was given---and lost...

~ loving hugs to a loving heart and to all those who gave of their service---and of their lives

Linda

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8 posted 2002-11-11 12:33 PM


Karilea,
A lovely tribute to veterans of courage, honor and sacrifice. To all of them and the families who gave we owe so much. God bless our veterans and their families and God bless the USA.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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9 posted 2002-11-11 12:33 PM


Amen. A fitting tribute to those brave souls that served and continue to serve our country.
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10 posted 2002-11-11 12:45 PM


Karilea, thanks very much for sharing this wonderful tribute to our Veterans.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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11 posted 2002-11-11 05:32 PM


What a beautiful, touching tribute. This is excellent, Sunshiney One!
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12 posted 2002-11-11 05:34 PM


This is certainly a great piece of work. And the subject matter is also quite fitting. Having both a father and grandfather who are veterans helped me appreciate this even more. Being in the service helps that too...
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13 posted 2002-11-11 09:29 PM


Wonderful...James
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14 posted 2002-11-11 10:35 PM


Karilea, must be the emotion of your poem and the looming possibility of a war with Iraq that brought tears to this gal's heart.

You do our vets proud with your words.

God bless the USA and you, dear poetess.  Huggles, Marti

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