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Shadows (working title) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I dance and play all through the day and try you may but catch me~ you never will. Held in the light within your sight I fall prey to the night when the morn arises~ I won’t return until. I am the shadows that spellbind your mind. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... {On wings of words our spirits fly~ and our souls are free. ~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-09-2002 01:51 PM).] |
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Crysania Member
since 2002-09-21
Posts 67Lost in a dream. (Please don't wake!) |
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, nice! I've written my share of poems about shadows, but this one's good. ;D May your shadow wander! Stephanie Do what you want and say what you feel. Those who matter won't mind and those who mind don't matter. (Forget who said that...must find their name.) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, I love the thoughts behind this poem. Very good. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Donna, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it! Shadows are so mischievious, aren't they, but when it's clody, bad news for shadow! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hmmm, did some thinking, but nothing has come to mind... yet!  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Donna, I really liked the words, and how it darted in and out like the very shadow it depicted in my mind. Nicely done.  [This message has been edited by Mysteria (11-09-2002 09:44 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
of course you know this one caught my curiosity. very well done, I love it! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That is exactly what it is like! The fleeting in and out of our shadow self. The yin and yang of our thoughts... ~ May you days be full of light--and your nights as well! Linda |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Donna! I think Shadows is a fine title. Or maybe Elusive Shadows or something to that effect? |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Donna, thank you for the thoughts that this brought forth in my mind. Which lately seems to be spending an awful lot of time in the dark. Hugs, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Donna darling girl oh my! This is simply one of the best I’ve seen in a long time. I truly don’t get here enough but there is only so much time in the day. I’m glad I didn’t get to miss this utter beauty it is extremely special the writing is perfect I love it utterly utterly As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the ending Donna..nicely done..have no idea about a title though *s M |
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