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The Sound
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The Sound |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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The sound of his breathing precious exhale of breath, then sigh of excitement a deliciously sweet vapor. I listen... Attentive in my heart in my body, in my spirit to the softness of him in gentle breathe of air. I feel... Upon myself, the air of him on flesh wet with desire the slow cool of breezed want soothing, this closeness of him. It is.. A caress of simple aura upon the very core of me in the loving sustain of life his breathing within my space. WhiteRose 11/09/02 "my reflection becomes me" |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
softly sensual, enjoyed |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
one of your better sensual pieces. i liked the last line best: breating in my space. that is such an expression of closeness. well done. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, this is a very beautifully written love poem. Very sensual. The part about "breathing within my space" was really neat. Gary has written the same words to me in love poems about being "in his space". Thanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhiteRose A very fine lace, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Anne, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I too just love that feeling of having my love whispering deep inside my heart and never able to escape! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
sigheyes, thanks so much, glad you enjoyed. majnu, if you like it my dear friend, then I am happy  Ethel, thank you sweet lady for reading and taking the time to respond.  Sy, thanks so much for those sweet words. Noah, as always, you touch me with your response. Thank you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Silky smooth and sensuous....you are such a fine writer of love and loving... EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you so much earthy angel, you know your comments mean a lot to me. |
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