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Stolen Simplicity Junior Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 22Canadian |
The blackness swirls in the big blue sky, The seemingly endless above clouds over high. Nearby is entranced with a thickening grey, My forever is crushed in one single day. My eyes are blinded, hearing is gone. I've lost my way, only blackness surrounds. THe dark engulfs my every move, Why me? This is not what I choose. The emptying black, Leaving nothing behind. A tear hits the ground, Not a sound is made. My life is missing, Without a trace. All I've known, Is gone in a day. The mark is make, There's no turning back, There's no way out, Not a soul around. If the darkness stays, What can I do? Choices are made, By someone I knew. I scream without sound, Cry with no pain. Hurt without anyone, To say it's okay. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions!!!! Great write. I really enjoyed it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Your poem took me back to my most alone times. Good to hear how you mean it. Thank you. etoodog |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Most aptly titled, indeed. Expressions written, I did feel. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. I enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to PIP, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Stolen Simplicity Welcome to passions. Enjoyed the read. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Ahhh.. Beauty. Loved it.. Thank you for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
OH YEAH!. Weclome to passions! i know you'l love it here.. Be sure to ask for help when you need it~! I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Oh Elizabeth, this is so very heartaching, sweet friend, I hope all of this is behind you now and now forever returns to your deserving heart, I send angel hugs of comfort to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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