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0 posted 2002-11-07 07:58 PM


She Shortened The Time
~ By Sue ~

To live on his parents land was not good
Many times I tried to get him to move
To move to a place that would be ours
My home I did not want to lose

He always had reasons why we could not
I had fear of what would happen to me
If something were to happen to him
But, this is something he could not see

I did not think about us splitting up
Together forever I thought we would be
Too many things started going wrong
Then he just up and walked out on me

His mother and I never got along
A month after he left his father died
She gave me until July to get off her land
It turns out that she had lied

She all of a sudden shortened the time
This is what I was afraid she would do
With me unable to get around very good
What I am going to do I have no clue

11-7-02



© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-07 08:02 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I'm so very sorry you went through so much, sweet friend, this is indeed such an ordeal and now I wish you both great comfort and healing and hope all goes well and you can be helped and reached out to! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-07 08:03 PM


I truely enoyed your poem. Please, please, keep writing, are are a skilled/gifted person.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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3 posted 2002-11-07 08:08 PM


Hi Sue, You are in my thoughts and prayers.  Things have a way of working out...you'll see.  Just take one day at a time.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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4 posted 2002-11-07 08:36 PM


Nobody needs that you deserve much better
J   *S*

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5 posted 2002-11-07 08:52 PM


Sue, I'm so sorry. I went through about the same thing with my late husband's sister. It's a long story, so I won't go all into it. Anyway, I'm not even staying over at my own house now. I use it more for storing my furniture and stuff. It's sad when these family conflicts happen. I am so thankful for really good friends (Gary's family included)

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-07-2002 08:53 PM).]

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6 posted 2002-11-07 09:00 PM


*hugs* this is such a sad situation....I hope it all works out for you
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