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Julie Jordan Scott
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0 posted 2002-10-14 01:24 PM


In a moment
We became
The same
Inseparable
Children
We once were

In a moment
We became
Julie
The Protector
John
The Protectee

As all the years
In between
Faded away
For a
Moment

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-14 01:27 PM


This poem reflects the relationship I have had with my younger brother.

Thank you for this wonderful, and meaningful poem!

EA

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2 posted 2002-10-14 02:27 PM




(sigh) Oh Julie, this is said so very well, sweet friend, relationships are meant to be twisted sometimes but as long as trust and faith exists it will endure! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2002-10-14 02:52 PM


Julie...This poem so effortlessly embodies the heart of love. Enjoyed this so very much. ***Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2002-10-16 01:00 PM


The bond that remains, and lasts ever.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

clumsy
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5 posted 2002-10-16 01:13 PM


lovely.
the_loner_23
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6 posted 2002-10-16 01:14 PM


Lovely poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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