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bslicker
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0 posted 2002-11-07 03:24 PM



Just Good Old Friends


well,
old friends that thought were lost
are true friends when one finds
that they weren’t lost
the self was lost to reminding
one’s self that true friends
still are friends
forever
needing
wanting
hurting
happy
glad
sad
always,
forever,
whenever,
new friends being old ones
olds ones there waiting
and still
just good friends


Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

© Copyright 2002 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2002-11-07 03:27 PM



Mikey~
Ah yes...nothing like good friends.
I enjoyed this, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-11-07 03:28 PM


Nice poem. Enjoyed it a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-11-07 03:29 PM


True friends between time and distance remain friends.  Wonderful write.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-07-2002 03:30 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-11-07 03:55 PM


I believe that true friends are there always, whether in your heart or within touch.
nicely done,
M

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5 posted 2002-11-07 04:13 PM


bslicker,

Great poem. Nice way to write a poem.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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6 posted 2002-11-07 11:09 PM




(smiles) A good friend never forgets, and you are a special friend who truly is loved among us all here, yay! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, you are a delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bernie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-11-07 11:27 PM


this really makes me want to call up beth.

it's never too late.  right?

thank you for sharing.

and putting the idea back into my head.

good write.

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

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8 posted 2002-11-08 06:48 AM


Vicky
yep nothing having friends old and new... by the way is Mikey a good friend that came to mind.  Thanks for reading

the_loner
thank you for reading

Gentle Spirit
Thanks for reading, did u think of some to get ahold of that you haven't talked to in a while


M
Thanks you and yes so true, so true, so true.

Connel
Thank you for reading.

Noah,
you are always so so kind with your replies, thank you for reading....... how do u do it every thing i read you've already been there....


Jen
Thanks for reading, and how's beth doing?


bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (11-08-2002 06:49 AM).]

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9 posted 2002-11-09 12:40 PM


Bernie, I don't know how I missed this. I really like the way you wrote this. It's very true, too. A person can never have too many friends...both old and new. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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