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As We Are
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As We Are |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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As We Are You linger on the tip of my tongue the taste of words teaching me that to season, would take away the temptation, the attraction that keeps you there... I use to feel trapped, my emotions spilling over into words, secrets once kept sometimes beyond understanding, leaving me a puzzle, to perplex those who thought they knew me. With or without you, you will always be in my present, the light of my mornings, the shadows of my nights, fading only into dreams where I meander, blending to balance what is mutual between us. ~M~ "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How well I understood this work. Such a beautiful tribute in fine lace and golden edgings. ThisDiamond |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Beautiful poem. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Nice! Enjoyed the read! God Bless! |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Maureen, I enjoyed this beautiful piece a lot.  Dawn |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, this is beautiful. I do believe you are healing, sweet lady. I could feel sweet peace coming from this poem. Thanks for sharing and just keep on letting it out through your beautiful writings. Your PIP family all love you so much. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I know. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Still lingering, but not there, understandable so. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Those shadows still sound very deep ... but so does your thoughts. "Tender into that night, a long awaited hold, though hopes may take to flight the darkness is untold." |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I liked the hopefulness and new beginnings experienced. Thank you. etoodog |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Your writing has such an ethereal quality... a dreaminess much like a distant deja-vu. I guess you tap into something familiar to many of us, and I thank you for sharing it. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And may your golden heart always heal in the afterglow of true love, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, may this intricate balance of life wrap you in this ethereal blessing forever, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Stolen Simplicity Junior Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 22Canadian |
That was excillent. You are truly an awesome writier |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ThisDiamond, thank you, I appreciate your responses to my words. Connel...as long as you are happy with what your write, then your poem is special (I was reading your signature..I don't know how they judge greatness today) Radrook, DawnG, garysgirl, I am glad you stopped to read and respond...I am dealing with each day as it comes..most are positive, a good thing for me. passing shadows hugsssss M Bernie...lingering is a favorite of mine. Thank You M ctowen, are these your words...they are beautiful, Craig...and inspiring. "Tender into that night, a long awaited hold, though hopes may take to flight the darkness is untold." thank you Robert, thank you for your time *s MARK, thank you for your visit here.Your poetry has been missed. Noah, I am feeling more balanced every day...not that I am unbalanced, mind you  hugs M Stolen Simplicity thank you for your kind words and Welcome to Passions. |
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