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Too long gone.... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Too long gone... She heard the wind a’howling down the stranger had come back to town she checked the mirror to find her smile it hadn’t visited in quite a while but the mirror had cracked in long ago she thought of Alice and the rabbit, so she ate a cookie sang a verse thought a bit it could be worse at least the door would fit her key even it she were off harmony she felt her legs a bit like stilts so she’d flamenço a bit off tilt she’d whirl in gauze and silken flutters just long enough for townfolk to mutter for she heard the wind a’howling down her stranger had come back to town {For Enchantress & Serenity} [This message has been edited by Decaflame (11-06-2002 01:46 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It is so good to see your words again Deca. I have been waiting......patiently.  Your words have a way of brightening my day. Your words.......have been missed. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-06-2002 02:00 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh Deca! YOU m'dear have been 'too long gone'!! How I have missed your words here... please say you'll stay awhile.. Thank you for the dedication... ~Hugs lady!~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sounds like the begining of a story  always wonderful to read you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling...that stranger, huh? who IS that masked man?  Thank you Deca... you touch my heart and cheer me on... and stilts, hmmm? you do know I'm afraid of heights. Not tall heights but short ones. The ones that WON'T kill you, but will just break your legs. sigh...Hugs, and thanks for this. (I'm kinda confused today...)  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Decaflame, first of all great rhyming, every subtle secondly great poem, enjoyed the read. I wonder now is there a lady version of this masked man and does she do house calls too? well I can dream, can't i..? lol I used to make phantoms I could later chase images of all that could be desired then I got tired of counting all of these blessings"h.devoto magazine |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Decaflame~ Funny thing...I was just thinking, earlier today, that it had been quite sometime since I had seen you. It's great to have you back, my friend. This was wonderfully penned, as always, and filled with so much emotion. Big hugs to you,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Decaflame...interesting name...and a very interesting write...I sense a hot time in store for the lady and the stranger...especially if he's been Too Long Gone...one way to warm up a cold November day. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy you're back as your gorgeous words have been missed by us all and your special friendship! (kiss on cheek) I love the whimsical breeze of this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Decaflame, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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