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Open Poetry #23

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Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

0 posted 2002-11-06 07:23 AM

I'm proud of the fact
I've no sound by my axe
Maybe your queen
I'm unseen
With a furious
Showboat knack

etoodog

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-11-06 07:56 AM

Robert, excellent poem, written with so few words. Enjoyed.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-11-06 10:44 AM

This is very interesting. I like it!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-11-06 11:39 AM

(smiles) This is very unique and esoteric, sweet friend, it has me contemplating how it would be without the sound made and how the answer would be taken, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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