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The Rose |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Touched by nature’s beauty Yet endowed by torn of pain The sirens of the garden Which entice each year again |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
hmmm...I like this. Yes, we roses are just like that. Darn them thorns.  |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
I like it too.. Lovely thoughts.. Hugesss Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rick, it could be that you have a typo, but "torn" works well in this, just as "thorn" would...in fact, you probably planned it that way, yes?  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rick, once again, you have captured so much in such few words....both beauty as well as pain. Roses are my favorite flowers...yellow ones being my favorite color (actually they're a yellow with pink, called "Peace Roses"). Thanks for sharing. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Rick I have many 'sirens' in my garden and they are absolutely beautiful at the moment. Thank you for these beautiful images. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Rick, this is soooooooo precious, sweet friend, know that after each rose dies the rose hasn't really and is only hibernating in the bulb in the ground where it will rise yet again to the siren song of springs harbinger! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Sorry everyone, torn is thorn, the h must have jumped off the page somewhere. Thanks for that Sunshine. WhiteRose, thanks for the reply, I love the roses as well, I look out at them from my computer, all growing over the arbor, just beautiful, but as you say, darn them thorns. Secretlife, nice to hear from you, much appreciated. Sunshine, I had read it a few times and missed the typo, I am glad you did not, thanks for the reply, nice to hear from you. Garysgirl, once again thank you for this reply, you encourage me to keep sharing my work, which I do with joy. Much appreciated. Dear Sue, a lovely time of the year, all our roses are about to bloom, a few are out and look wonderful in their coat of colour. Thanks for the reply, much enjoyed. Sincerely Rick Please all have a wonderful week. |
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