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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2002-11-04 05:55 PM



On the edge in the misty dawn
Weary, barely focussed lazy yawn
Wholly immersed into the coming day
The robin is reluctant to sway
Until I raise a smile staring at the rainbow
The dreams were of tomorrow

The winds have changed direction
The waters have filled the ocean
Many a bee have pollinated a flower
Terror has not yet been destroyed
Yet, we have within, the power
To be heard, to be understood

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2002 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-11-04 06:18 PM


JD~
So nice to see you~

This is not only lovely ...
it has a poignant plea within~
Beautifully said~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-04 07:26 PM


"Time in a Hollow" is a very intriguing title--and it delivers!

Earth Angel

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3 posted 2002-11-04 07:30 PM


Nice, Nice, Nice... I hope to read more of your poetry...

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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