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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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I went back today to read over the script and the bit part you played what should have been obvious hit me square in the eyes. Still I can't comprehend the inconsistency of dual personalities and your fickle heart that was incapable of feeling bowing out at your convenience, predictably. I'd heard rumors but I had to see for myself and get lost in my own heart in order to understand the moral of the story and so it goes. Once was never enough the show went on and on drawn out so it would last longer while I covered my eyes refusing to see fidgeting horribly in my seat trying to get comfortable in your company. Hindsight being twenty-twenty I didn't like being that close so I would have to look I thought about giving up my season tickets going, going, gone to the highest bidder a price that cost me dearly, all for not. Knowing full well there are no stars in low budget movies no climbing the ladder or falling from grace tough luck that it happened that way. There's no rewinding the reruns no guaranteed returns loves a long shot at best and happy endings are a nightmare when the plot thickens in order to pay the piper k sera sera. You were just one of many or was that me or was it purely for attention aiming to please to fill your hours and arms and let me down easy. Encore encore grant me an interview tell me something good where do you go when it's all over and what's your real name anyway. Explain to me again so that I can understand the part you played when the heart ache came and the reason I cried in the end~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Lori, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, sadly sometimes those we love most can seem like the antagonist soetimes and it is so very strange then it all becomes some kind of B-movie to you! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you and hope all works out in the sequel, sweet friend, God Bless You, encore, we all love you so much! You have such a ebautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
your beautiful eyes should never know tears....hugsssss sweet lady, so good to see you here....I know such pain that aches through this....if ya need to vent I am an email away....  Deep inside the stillness ........I can hear you speak You're still an inspiration ........To me [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-03-2002 08:07 PM).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This speaks..and that is a part of what poetry should do. I love it...*sigh* and I understand it  "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sounds like the curtain came down, crashing!! Some movies are over rated, some are considered sleepers (before their time). If you need a hand to hold through the scary parts, or someone to share the popcorn with ... I, too, am only a friend away. Season tickets are hard to come by!  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, dear friend, If our felings are supposed to show through in poetry, you have certainly accomplished that in this poem. It's like you've finally got the other person figured out. I truly hope that this poem is totally from observation, and that you aren't really having to go through this, sweet friend. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Encore encore grant me an interview tell me something good where do you go when it's all over and what's your real name anyway" Lori gal, can I keep this forever? It is so totally 100%! An outstanding writing, from the opening to the closing curtain. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ This is totally heartfelt~ A beautifully creative 'review'~ You, sweet poetess, deserve a cry of ENCORE for this~ Take a bow ... *applause* *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you all for your soft touch and most of all for letting me be me...it is truly the warmth and comfort I seek when I write this way... Hugs all around you~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Blues, lady, I know how it is...good vent! Kinda sad but still great! |
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