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VAS
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0 posted 2002-11-03 12:16 PM



Cold Dog?

cold outside
warm in here
sitting in robe
gown
and thermals

I wanna go to church
I’m sure I do
but
wish could just go as I am
all comfy
hair mussed

dog next door
all kinds o’ energy
popping him around the yard
in his altogether
rolling in the frost
all lazy tossed

and I
sitting here
still
wiggling fingers on the keys
keeping lazy
with so much ease

wonder if...
if I could go out there
in my underwear
like dog
would I find vitality
beyond the laze
that feeds me now

guess I would
or die
of frostiness profound
“Whata hound!”
happy-go-lucky
on the ground

©November 3, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-11-03 04:32 PM


This is really cute, Virginia. I liked it a lot.
I could just see the dog jumping around playfully.
Thanks for sharing.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-11-03 04:47 PM


Virginia,  have you been touched by a frost
lately?   This is cute...Brrrrrrrr..

Radrook
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3 posted 2002-11-08 05:35 AM


Dogs have a normal temp of 106 Fahrenheit.
That's what helps them be so comfortable in the cold. Which makes me envy them cause I wanna role around like that in the snow sometimes too!  LOL
Enjoyed!
God bless!

Connel
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4 posted 2002-11-08 10:56 AM


LOL.. Well. it made me laugh in a spot.. But its a good poem.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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5 posted 2002-11-08 11:40 PM


this was a very visual piece, and you did an impressive job with it.

nicely done.

and i guess i never really did know a dog's average body temperature, but it's good to know.  

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

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