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The Sunshine Of You Free verse
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The Sunshine Of You Free verse |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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The Sunshine Of You Free verse If others could look inside Peer into that place within They would see my soul Sprinkled with the Sunshine of your smile The warmth of Your love They would see that I Am only as good as you Made me The sparkle that Glitters in my soul Comes from the Touch of you They’d see the love That wraps my soul In such peace They’d hear the music That awakens my Spirit to dance All the gifts of you They’d know that I am only all that I am Because I have you Encouraging Supporting Loving Caring Sharing I am me because Of the sunshine of Your spirit Holds the soul Of Me I am Because Of You Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is such a sweet poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Marsha... you write such lovely free verse, I would love to see you do it more often... You expressed yourself beautifully here  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
See love I told you this needed to be seen, and admired. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It takes a special person to make sure that you are always warm inside... to have that love... is to know pure joy.... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Beckoning love is at first a whisper then becomes a shout which cannot be ignored the sum of who and what we become relies on who we are loved by and how much we are loved If I am not missing my guess, this was more than just an average poem for you, but more of a pronouncement of happiness in disovery. Wishing you Love and Joy, jeff [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (11-03-2002 08:20 AM).] |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
"They'd know that I am only all that I am Because I have you Encouraging Supporting Loving Caring Sharing" How beautiful.....my feelings about my Gary, exactly !! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I just love this, sweet friend, I know this special feeling ever so well, when just a simple smile of a sweetheart becomes your whole real life's beginning! (kiss on cheek) I know these feelings ever so much for I have them of my Joanna, yay, this is gorgeous, may this happiness always fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
These are the words of a woman passionately in love with the mate of her heart. I love the beauty of your love, your romantic heart. It speaks of a woman who has found the fulfillment of all her most secret and wonderful desires. Very beautiful and regal poem!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mush, Don't stop writing free verse....the impact of your words is exceptional when written this style.... Well done , UTTERLY SO! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I see Keth is pushing you along...so that you post those poems from your heart...nicely done Marsha dear and share these hugs with Keth for doing so hugsssssss M |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
mum excellent writing. This poem is really one of your best, .I thought I told you to leave the free verse to me mum well never mind love it still. Very well written  love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you everyone you are all appreciated, Keth beloved heart YOU are biased and this was too hard for me to do on a regular basis. YOU know where it comes from and that my mind simply doesn’t work well in a free verse format. Krissy darling daughter, YOU are only jealous that now MY talent has come out to play. Okay I lie, but don’t crow too loud or I’ll cut you off at the knees. Just stay away from rhyme darling you know it is too difficult for you to do. You know I only mean it lovingly darling heart  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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