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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-11-02 10:37 AM



Silent Thoughts




Nestling begins
Nature still nurturing life
Pixies find droplets
Earthworms begin their supper
Do not awake Morpheus

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-11-02 10:41 AM


A concentrate of simple pleasure...dinnertime folk under the raindrops. Really enjoyed. ThisDiamond
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-11-02 10:44 AM


Leave it up to you to come up with something so unique.  This is lovely Karilea.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

{On wings of words our spirits fly~ and our souls are free.  ~me}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-02-2002 10:46 AM).]

NewEnglandlazurlu
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3 posted 2002-11-02 10:45 AM


Love the picture so much and the words are so life giving. Great just great. Wish I had written this!!!

Hugs, Marti

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-02 10:56 AM


...Ah, the world around us that most do not see--but you do!--and you show it to others through your wondrous poetry!

Linda

Martie
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5 posted 2002-11-02 11:09 AM


Karilea

In and out, around about, hidden treasures for those who look.  Lovely!

garysgirl
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6 posted 2002-11-02 11:15 AM


Karilea, once again, you have
painted a lovely picture for
my mind's eye to enjoy. Thanks.
~With Love to All,
Ethel

Ivy Rose
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7 posted 2002-11-02 12:49 PM


Loved the picture with the picture-perfect portrait of your words.  As always, Sunshine, I find your work to be so inspiring and fulfilling.  ***Ivy Rose
WhileIWasGone
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8 posted 2002-11-02 01:05 PM


Oh my Sunshine...this is VERY BEAUITFUL...
I just love it....enjoyed so much.


DeaDiAmore

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-11-02 01:08 PM


Sunshine - thoughts with the silent leaves, nice...

BC

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10 posted 2002-11-02 01:10 PM


a lovely and unique look at all, yet accurate to the max!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Enchantress
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11 posted 2002-11-02 01:20 PM


Simply enchanting...I love this!
It's all there if only we take the time to see.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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