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Wind
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0 posted 2002-10-13 09:52 PM



Caramel on a stick
So rich and sweet and chewy
gone in ten seconds

© Copyright 2002 Liz - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-13 09:57 PM


You just made me hungry again. LOL Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

majnu
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2 posted 2002-10-13 10:04 PM


well you won a caramel apple!

seriously it was nice.


fyi: traditionally haikus are concerned with nature.

WhiteRose
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3 posted 2002-10-13 10:09 PM


This is yummy.
Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2002-10-13 10:32 PM


Absolutely! Nice one.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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5 posted 2002-10-14 12:00 PM




(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...I love this, sweet friend, this made me hungry for Dairy Queen, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2002-10-14 09:00 AM


This is very yummy and gooey!  

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

VAS
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7 posted 2002-10-14 09:51 AM


Must not be a Sugar Daddy, those aren't even gone in 10 minutes!
I should have known not to come in here. Going in for the annual blood-work up this a.m. so can't each until after the nurse takes her samples.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Hearts_Dance
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8 posted 2002-10-16 12:51 PM


Caramel is one of my favorite treats, and even better on apples. Neat!
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