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scorpio
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0 posted 2002-11-01 07:55 AM


Not Said

We talked last night.
But parted with things not said.
I left things not right.
I know I made you sad.
But in the morning light
I want to make amend
I need to hold you tight.
I love you.
Now it's been said.

...believe what your heart feels...

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1 posted 2002-11-01 08:20 AM




(sigh) This is so sensitive and beautiful, sweet friend, and I hope your love hears you and happily hugs you with a smile always! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-01 08:25 AM


Scorpio - Welcome to the club.  Here's a bit of wisdom - First you learn how to crawl, then you learn how to walk, then you become a man, then you learn how to crawl.  I'm getting better at the crawling part.
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3 posted 2002-11-01 08:32 AM


Ah dear Scorpio..Things always look much better in the morning light, you know?  
Perhaps the unsaid things will be even more welcome come the dawn.  Maybe she just needs a big hug and for you to tell her how much she's loved.  
Yet another thoughtful write from you.. touching on one of life's sad yet tender moments.
~Morning Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

scorpio
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4 posted 2002-11-01 08:37 AM


Noah...Thank you for your kind support.
LongJohn...I'll crawl over anything to make her happy.
Enchantress...I can only hope she feels my love today.

...believe what your heart feels...

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-11-01 01:23 PM


So often we see things much more clearly in the light of the following day. Give her this touching poem and hopefully it will undo anything that you want undone!

EA

scorpio
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6 posted 2002-11-01 02:08 PM


Thank you Earth Angel...The morning light does tend to make things better...I shall dedicate this poem to my love and hopes she will forgive me...

...believe what your heart feels...

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