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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-10-31 10:34 AM


Watch Out

Watch out my friend beware the night
The creatures of the dark prepare to bite
They’ll suck the life from your soul
Then lead you into hell’s deepest hole
There’s no escape if you let them free
So you better watch your step carefully
Beware my friend they’ll come for you
If to the safe path you don’t hold true

Beware my friend the un-dead rise
They’ll grab your soul before sunrise
Don’t let them get their hands on you
They’ll take you apart its what they do
Your spirit is at risk so is your heart
You’ll be warped by their black art
Take my warning and heed it well
They come from the darkest depths of hell

Take cover my friend the witches fly
Across the moon blackening the sky
Don’t let them speak aloud your name
For if they do you’ll go insane
The spell they cast will steal your mind
And nameless things inside you’ll find
Be wary of the hags that haunt the night
They’re sure to steal your soul’s delight

Beware the creatures that prowl this place
Their touch with sorrow’s fear is laced

Marsha


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-10-31 10:42 AM


I am always aware..

but you can't scare me..you are too soft hearted

and I like you that way...

hugsss
M

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2 posted 2002-10-31 12:43 PM


Be afraid. *G* Be very, very afraid! LOL

Or swing a helluva mean baseball bat. *G*

I enjoyed this very much, Marsha... *shiver and peek over shoulder* LOL

LngJhnAg
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3 posted 2002-10-31 03:30 PM


OMG - Somebody finally wrote a poem about divorce lawyers!  You go, girl!  lol
Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-10-31 04:23 PM


Oh cackle cackle cackle..... stir that witches brew, Marsha...
a great Halloween poem!
~ witchy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Krissy
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5 posted 2002-11-01 06:10 PM


mum next you will be saying you are a witch. This poem is really about  you not about halloween isn’t it  I thought so, Beautiful I’m keeping this one to use on my windows to keep the witches away, sorry I forgot you are one aren’t you.
Very well written


love and warm stuff
as always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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6 posted 2002-11-01 11:33 PM




(shivers at edge of seat) Oh my gosh, I almost didn't make it through! (speaks in Lucille Ball desperate voice) I'M A HALLO-WEENIE!!! (giggles) This is delightful, sweet friend, this too gave me the shivers, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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