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Wind
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0 posted 2002-10-13 12:36 PM



You stare into my face.
Someone I do not reconize.
Excuse me, do I know you?

You speak no reply.
And i see through your disguise
And understand.


I knew you all along

© Copyright 2002 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-10-13 12:51 PM


Excellent...well said....welcome to Passion's!

Enjoy this place and continue to share..

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-10-13 01:13 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very nice first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

DawnG
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3 posted 2002-10-13 01:17 PM


Wind,

A very nice poem to which I can relate. Welcome to Passions and please check your mail for a very special greeting.  

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4 posted 2002-10-13 01:17 PM



Hello, Wind.  Welcome to Passions!  I'm looking forward to reading more of your work...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

scorpio
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5 posted 2002-10-13 02:27 PM


Welcome...to the best place on the web...I know you'll enjoy it...and we look forward to more of your words..

...believe what your heart feels.....

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-13 02:33 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwwww, this is such a wonderful debut, sweet friend, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Wind, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wind, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-10-13 02:41 PM


Wind...This poem exemplifies a poem well-written and shared with an eye for the truth.
I often thought that the face in the mirror is a stranger to me, at times. This poem expresses that concept so magnificently.
***Ivy Rose

Charisma
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8 posted 2002-10-13 02:58 PM


Welcome to passions....and what a wonderful entrance you'd made here.....like it a lot

Charisma

Wind
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9 posted 2002-10-13 03:42 PM


Thanks everyone!!
You've made me feel so welcome here.
I love all of your encouragemet and can not tell you how much i appreciate this

[This message has been edited by Wind (10-13-2002 03:43 PM).]

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10 posted 2002-10-13 10:36 PM


Wind....Welcome to this wonderful "family of friends" here at PIP. I know you will like it here. I enjoyed your poem very much. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
Love To All,
Ethel

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11 posted 2002-10-13 10:49 PM


This poem is small but mighty!

Welcome Wind! Your new home away from home--one great big, happy, supportive family of kindred spirits!

Earth Angel

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12 posted 2002-10-14 01:38 AM


Sounds like a bit of Dejavue
in insights sharpening

A very nice and compact read.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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13 posted 2002-10-14 03:43 PM


Wind, Welcome! I loved this and hope to read more of your works.

Scary to look in the mirror some days.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Wind
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14 posted 2002-10-19 08:57 PM


Yay! I finaly found out how to find your old poems so I can read all of these wonderfull things that you wrote!!!
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