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LesterVisaya
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since 2002-11-16
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0 posted 2002-12-06 01:02 AM


Everything seems smaller
compared with the lenses I use to hide behind
I know am not the same as I was last year
I wasn’t the same an hour ago
I feel this numb sorrow been sprouted just a minute ago
Sometimes I feel its been with me forever
The rest of the world has robbed me my own world
This isn’t about running away from people
nor running away from problems of my shallow clutter
nor proving stupidity only exists in reason
This isn’t about making things more easier
In a way I knew it all along
I need to connect with my core
to make me stop running away from my hypocrisy
I’ll seek under the years
Those words hurt because of this deprived soul
not because this ego
I’ve hung old habits,dried out all tears
Each day becomes a shadow of yesterday
I’m less than what I should be with this unfinished honesty
Could I have been more curious of the devil’s ways?
Could I have gone roads of the hypocrite innocent one?
I guess I could of…
I have no one to blame but the mirrors reflection
once again I’m lost in sanitys void.


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Jaime
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1 posted 2002-12-06 10:57 AM


You could have.. but then it would not have been your way.. and you'd be doomed to relentless imitation. At least you are you.

Sometimes I'm not sure which is more painful.. to be insane or to be sane. Having dipped into certain depths of insanity.. I'm pretty sure that my sanity had put me there.

Jaime

i was here

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
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2 posted 2002-12-06 12:28 PM


That was a very good poem. Keep up the good work. Laugh often, love much, live well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

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