Frederick - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

0 posted 2002-12-05 12:20 PM

I have to tell you now this is a VERY silly poem, if you don't like silly then I suggest you don't read it. Thank you Stinkie Twinkie for inspiring me to write something other than the norm.

Frederick

See here my little black fruit fly
He really is the apple of my eye.
He'll only live for a week or 2
And then he'll die
But I don't care,
Because he's my little black fruit fly.
Frederick is his name
And I taught him myself not to lie.
He knows so many different tricks
He really is the apple of my eye.
Be careful when you pet him,
Because if you push too hard
You'll squash him and he'll die.
Don't you just love my little black fruit fly?

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

[This message has been edited by WinterWren (12-05-2002 02:58 PM).]

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

1 posted 2002-12-05 04:24 PM

:claps: Well done! Maybe Frederick and my pet wasp Sid could meet up for a drink sometime!
Ellie

"I'm terribly sorry ma'am, my karma just ran over your dogma"

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

2 posted 2002-12-05 04:29 PM

hahahaha that was right good. You're welcome for the inspiration.

-Stinky Twinkie-

[This message has been edited by Stinky Twinkie (12-05-2002 09:25 PM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-12-14 12:33 PM

WinterWren~
This is really cute and funny too.
Thanks for the smile.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

4 posted 2002-12-14 12:55 PM

This is really neat, people really don't write many like these anymore! What a way to get a smile!

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

5 posted 2003-01-22 05:06 PM

Wow! I haven't been on here in a while! *looks at all the stuff that came up after searching for yer stuff* Seems like I have some work to do! Well, I have no idea why I never replied to this, but, needless to say, I didn't. Well, it's about time I change that, so here it goes!
Well, it's quite the lighthearted, cute, funny lil' poem! A refreshing break, as they always are, from the norm! Thanks for the write!

Too strong to give up, to weak to move on....

leo_babe
Junior Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 13

6 posted 2003-01-22 05:14 PM

Hey that's cool...it's a nice change from all the dark, depressing poems on these forums

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.