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WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to

0 posted 2002-12-03 07:49 PM


Dirge of Winter

I drift with the cold wind to fall into the snow.
My heart is sinking through it all.
If I could only dream of you,
But even the dream of you is gone.
The song of the bitter wind will put me to sleep,
But not to find surcease from sorrow.
Tomorrow won't bring release from the cold.
The dreams that come are only wishes from yesterday,
And I won't find you within them.
Where you have gone no one will find you.
Death held your hand too tight.
And now it is always cold.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

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HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
1 posted 2002-12-03 07:54 PM


Aww... this was so sad.... It reached down and plucked at some heart strings I thought were long lost.  All I can say is that I'm sorry....  It was a great poem, if written about a sad event.  Hope you're okay.  
                                                        Rich

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie
2 posted 2002-12-03 08:05 PM


what in the name of corn on the cob is going on? I had an idea for a poem with almost the exact same title.  It was a great poem, I enjoyed it.

-Stinky Twinkie-

Smoothy
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since 2002-12-02
Posts 119
The dark side of the moon
3 posted 2002-12-03 08:11 PM


Brought a tear to my eye. Hope you feel better if it was based on true events that happened to you.
knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
4 posted 2002-12-07 04:11 AM


this was a strong piece all the way through. i think you wrote it very well. ^^
especially liked the last five lines. post more eh?

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

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