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IndigoEve
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since 2003-01-10
Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2003-06-11 10:07 AM


**Please come back today**


Moon of battered nights
Bleed with me,
A silvery rain?
Let it pour from my fingertips,
Staining fragility,
Abhorrent of the sun.
Gently,
A thousand broken melodies
Will ring,
Soundlessly?
Somehow still echoing within my hollow mind.
Instilled in this solemnity,
Silence grows,
Deafening;
All preciousness lost unto tragedy.
Watch as the blood comes
My soul pricked by you,
Cherished rose?
Count the blessed thorns whilst they nullify,
Beauty forgotten.
I was the air,
I was the midnight legacy;
My eyes laced with darkened glory,
Condemning this failing world.
And your hands kept me,
Still
Motionless in the wake of sorrow, 'twas I;
Drinking in the mercy,
Of a tarnished lullaby;
Deceptive.
Darkness cannot linger in ebony delight,
Dyeing mahogany.
My hair stays one russet tinge,
Tasting the bitterness of which I'm fed;
Lies.
I trust not a word that escapes those delicate lips,
Your love means nothing?
But yet,
It is I who cries for tenderness.
Oh, where are you when I feel like dying?
Such is it that emptiness is my eternal song,
Woven into fantasy.
Starlight dips its sweet, sweet flavor
Into my sapphire eyes,
Sugared weeping they behold,
Softly withered.
Even as eternity relents,
My own crystal heart will break?
And now, I neatly shatter
For, it is time to let you go.  


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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
1 posted 2003-06-11 01:09 PM


i like the sadness portraied in this pice keep writing
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-06-11 03:00 PM


beautifully sad, sadly beautiful, great writing keep it up
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