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dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

0 posted 2002-11-29 06:12 PM

the title is cuz i was on a cell phone and now there is this new thing where u can alert them so i couldnt think of a title so i just chose that
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i just wanna go home,
but no,
not even to my own house can i go
you told me one thing,
but when i heard the phone ring,
it was a whole different story
but now what we have here is a case of you lying,
and all i can do is sit here crying,
i just wanna go home
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i no it is short
and to the few ppl who know what it is about it seems kinda silly, dont it ??
and i havent written in a week or 2 so i am kinda warmin up again and i know it aint that good but it helped to write it out this is longer than the poem!! lol

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-11-29 06:14 PM

lol.. RED ALERT!
haha, ne way.
I like this.
I hate being away from my house,
unless I'm out having fun..
which, i'm usually not.
lol.
Hope u get home.
"momma i'm comin home!!"
yea, i'm ok.
good write!

byebye

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-11-29 06:33 PM

Well, I know what your talkin about. Sometimes life is unpredictable..As a good friend of mine once said "Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you`re gonna get" Live by these words my fiend..Live wisely.LOL
*Allison*

clve527
Member

since 2002-07-08

Posts 200

3 posted 2002-11-29 06:37 PM

You're friends with the writer's of Forrest Gump?

Casey

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

4 posted 2002-11-30 02:18 PM

hey,
here u go sara
thanx to every1 for replyin
it means alot
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

5 posted 2002-12-01 10:18 PM

I am sorry for this Sam but I told you I was gonna do this...
clve527- I am going to address this situation because it has been buggin me for a while. I don`t like the way you say things..I think that how you say things comes off as a bit rude and I feel like you should tone down your replies because they are very ...well rude. They can kick me off this site for saying this but maybe they will realize the rude things you say.
*Allison*

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

6 posted 2002-12-01 11:38 PM

The truth is that your poem is very good. I can feel the emotion.

WinterWren

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

7 posted 2002-12-02 09:46 PM

DOES ANYONE SEE WHAT I SAID?
*Allison*

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

8 posted 2002-12-03 07:11 PM

hey,
thx to every1 for replyin and allison,
i saw what you wrote and u dont have to apologize for writing it. i dont really appreciate how clve527 applies SOMETIMES.
other times like the reply here she didnt really say anything but u were just the one to address it first.
thanx again for replyin
~sam~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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