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Teen Poetry #6

The Believers Pendulum

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

0 posted 2002-11-21 03:51 PM

My world crumble on the floor
And I cannot feel anymore
What my life was like three days ago
Provisional productions hinder my
Spine-less attempts at nothing
There's gotta be more to life than this
Life out there I can smell but not taste
What a cruel trick, why don't you...
Come fly with me in outer space?
Do you think we can breath out here,
When our vacuum takes our air?
Positive productions fueling our feeble
Attempt at human nature
Can you honestly say that our society
Has not pushed the petal to the metal
On a one way track of steel and
Frozen moments in which people die?
Worship God, Satan, or the in-between
Just don't float in limbo BELIEVE!
In yourself, in others, in me
In something, in anything, because you can't believe in nothing.
Believe in not believing
As long as you believe...
Your life shall never be dull.

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2002-11-21 06:07 PM

hey,
this was good,
i liked it
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2002-11-21 09:35 PM

this was very well written, we should all believe in something...maybe.
anyways.....i really enjoyed reading your poem.

regina

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

3 posted 2002-11-21 11:07 PM

Thanks everybody!

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