Teen Poetry #6 |
Depression |
PeaceInEverything Junior Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 31Ohio, United States |
Despair, Saddness, and Depression, Bubbling up like thick black tar To surround every aspect of life. Everywhere I turn there is the monster, Seeking to fatally injure me. Depression, like a python squeezing my heart. Strangling every thought of love. Like a blanket of malice covering my eyes, So I can not see that which I love. I fight like a madman against his restraints. Despair, and Depression will NOT have me! I have let it win before and barely kept my mind. The surface shows a healthy happiness. While inside happiness starts to give way to doubt. How long till the termites of doubt fell the tree of happiness? [This message has been edited by PeaceInEverything (11-21-2002 12:11 AM).] |
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jennilynn Junior Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 29here with me |
I liked this. It hit close to home. thanks for the read. ~Jen~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
this too hits close to home for me...well done..thanks for the read and keep fighting sweety.. Standing on the edge of the world |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
PeaceInEverything~ Some very well expressed emotions in this piece, and some excellent imagery as well. Very nicely penned. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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MidnightSkyeBlue Junior Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 14 |
This hits way too close to home for me..I'm vibing it most definately I can't stop crying today I feel weak...I feel pathetic..but gotta try to pick myself up..your words convey you have hope that you will pick yourself up in no time..I know its easier said then done.. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
** sniff ** good right riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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