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Challenge #2 (late, I know!)
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Challenge #2 (late, I know!) |
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ryanna lauryn New Member
since 2002-11-09
Posts 9KS |
Rain streams down my window You once told me rain was God's tears And the words captured my veneration No, not only the words' beautiful meaning…but you, just you Never once, though, did you ever really see me And to think you said such resplendent words to my face Looking back at a window, I watch more tears fall from the sky. And while recollecting what he was and wasn't, I realize his words I will never forget, Understanding still what they meant at one time, yet altered in my mind the words will forever be Reaching into your soul was what you did for me, but really acknowledging me must have been too much… You once told me rain was God's tears Now I believe the rain is not God's, but my inner tears never cried for you. "consider how hard it is to change yourself and you'll understand what little chance you have in trying to change others." -jacob m. braude |
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ryanna lauryn New Member
since 2002-11-09
Posts 9KS |
one line was too long so it made the "lauryn" part of my name not look like a real acrostic. gosh that sucks...hopefully anyone who reads this can over look it (it fit on Word where i originally wrote it). SORRY!!! ~*~Ryan~*~ "consider how hard it is to change yourself and you'll understand what little chance you have in trying to change others." -jacob m. braude |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ryanna lauryn~ This is absolutely beautiful! It is never too late to participate in one of the challenges and you've done an outstanding job of meeting this particular challenge. I am truly impressed. EXTREMELY well done.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*twitch* (<-- in a good way of course) I have found another hero... wow... This is absolutely beautiful, and I'm glad I got the opportunity to read this Wow...I am a Knight who says Ni! |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
as vicky said, it's never too late around here. we don't function on deadlines. this is a deadline free environment!!  thanks for sharing. /jen/ i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now. |
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ryanna lauryn New Member
since 2002-11-09
Posts 9KS |
thank you for the wonderful compliments. ~*~ryan~*~ "consider how hard it is to change yourself and you'll understand what little chance you have in trying to change others." -jacob m. braude |
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