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Raining Cats And Dogs - Acrostic
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Raining Cats And Dogs - Acrostic |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*Raining Cats And Dogs*~ Rainclouds overhead Arizona monsoon approaches Impatiently I wait... Ninety-five degrees outside Ice cream would be nice Note to self- Get some mint 'n chip Clap of thunder At last! Tiny raindrops fall Storm is underway Awesome lightning strikes Narrated by thunderous song Deafening serenade Dare I dance in the rain? Opalescent moon appears Grins at me...and I Soaking wet...smile back ~vlraynes Just thought I'd share this oldie with you since our acrostic challenge is just about over.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-14-2002 05:08 PM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awesome...absolutely awesome Standing on the edge of the world |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
waiting for the next one... is it about shaving?  hahaha.../jen/ i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
xShUgArHiGhx...thanks much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Jen...LOL! I'll have to give that some thought. Thanks for reading and replying. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hey, I didn't even see this one! No fair! Bump!  This is awesome Vicky (mmmmmm, mint 'n' chip *drools*) I am a Knight who says Ni! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i dont like rain very much, usually means winters on the way and i abhor winter. but i did enjoy your acrostic it was nice reading a poem by you regina |
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Stained Glass Junior Member
since 2002-11-14
Posts 10Why Georgia |
I traditionally doing like acrostics. Maybe its cause sometimes they just dont sound good. Maybe its that I cant write one  But nevertheless, I LOVED this one. I love rain and I love that feeling you aptly described. How could I not love it? Mint N Chip ice cream and Rain in one poem! "Zoom in as they burn the past to the ground and feel the heat of the future's glow..." Jonathan Larson - RENT [This message has been edited by Stained Glass (11-22-2002 01:05 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Thanks much for the positive comments. They are very much appreciated and I'm glad you enjoyed this one. And now...I need ice cream! ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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k2tomtom21k New Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 9 |
my favorite part of this piece was the Words you spelled (raining cats and dogs). i like cats and dogs and rain |
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