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Teen Poetry #6

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Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2002-11-08 03:48 PM

Two friends, just friends
then our eyes meet.
Then its was more than friends.
The same question, but from you.
From then on we fell in love.
Just us together, but with two hearts,
two hearts loving eachother.
seems like the world is in our hands,
but not always.
It wasnt a miracle nor luck that we are together,
maybe we are just ment to be,
not only in love, but also together.
The love we share will never loose,
nor fade with time.
Always remember once friends,
always friends.

"Water Over Matter"

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

1 posted 2002-11-08 04:03 PM

sweet little piece

I enjoyed it very much

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

2 posted 2002-11-09 09:11 AM

So true, good piece!

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-11-10 12:33 PM

Wow, I like how you equated love and friendship... I've always appreciated the importance of the relationship between love and friendship, but you don't even discuss them as separate concepts too much... especially in the end.

Very nice work... post more!

Parasite

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-11-14 02:35 PM

Lisa~
I love the 'thought' of this write.
Your words made me smile today.
Especially these lines...

"Always remember once friends,
always friends."

Beautifully said.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

5 posted 2002-11-14 04:33 PM

If you and poetry dont mix then i dont know how great this ended up lol. Very nice write and i like the last to lines especially because they couldnt be more true.

Chris

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