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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
What's mine is yours, Is yours is mine, Is really theirs, But they pay us, So in effect... It's ours, But we hate each other, So we gotta split, (edited by moderator) Bubbles pop and, Bubbles blow but, Nothing in nature sucks, Impossibilities range, From me to God, And why is gravity so heavy? If most people, Are afraid to die, Then why are there, So many suicides? People push and, People shove but, What if we were one? If you push one, We all fall down. And tell me... Why is that so bad? As questions everyday, Where you could, The most if from, Yourself... Never question yourself, Just ask yourself, Questions. And never let anything, Go unlearned. [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-07-2002 04:27 PM).] |
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SuperSonic Junior Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 16Northern Ireland |
I quite liked this one. Its inquisitive manner really added to the poem. Good stuff! If you ever wanna talk or somethin' just e-mail me |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Ya know...I got really tongue tied with "What's mine is yours, Is yours is mine, Is really theirs" I'm not sure why either hehe. Oh well, I liked this...good use of words, though some caught me off guard =-P OuTsTaNdInG! Laura "I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful." |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Very nice work, Darkness. Strength by means of inquisition that lived up to its title. Much enjoyed by yours truly. Parasite Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored. |
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