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sailing away
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sailing away |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
Mabey I'll sail away again soon, I start to feel stagnant in the calm stillness of your waters, there are no breezes here to freshen my face. I want to be caught up in a storm again with the wild wind and rain rocking me from side to side, I want to look up at the darkning sky and smell the tension in the air, feel the currents pulling me towards the unknown depths. So I think I'll have to leave your tranquil shores, when I get caught up in my new whirlwind no doubt I'll long for them once again |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I really love this pieces of poerty...I feel like this sometimes myself...so it's relatable...great work! |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I gotta agree with brian, I love this poem. I think we all feel that way from time to time; I know I have. Really, this was an incredible poem! Keep it up! -Rich "You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!" |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Just perfect. I couldn't have done this better myself. You always set such a distinct image in your poetry and go to such a length to extend its clarity, its power... This is such a great piece. Excellent work. Parasite |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
anya~ This is excellent.  I am truly enjoying your writing. Keep it coming, my friend. ~Vicky P.S. Don't forget to check out Teen Challenge #2! "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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