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Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2002-10-31 06:54 AM

Shadows in the dark,
Converting into light.
Some find it hard,
To live over the pain.
The thing your most afraid of,
He'll gladly fight.
The voices you hear in you sleep,
That's him calling out to you.
You hear branches scrapping,
Against your window.
Thats just a distraction,
So he can crawl into your room.
He controls your mind,
And controls your dreams.
Even if you don't notice it,
He's always with you.
As a gentle breeze,
flows past you as you sleep.
Don't worry,
That's just him cleansing you.
You start to shiver,
But then feel warmth.
Thats him,
Lying next to you.
You dream that your protected from harm,
Im reality he's your protection.
As the night goes on,
You realize that you'll be safe.
Now you have nothing to fear,
Because he'll be with you for the rest of your life.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
I know the poem doesn't make ANY sense...Thats because i've hidden a little messege in that poem.
And the lines that don't make ANY sense once so ever have their own little meanings for example:
~A gentle breeze flows past you.
****That means that the air is representing his soul.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Ya like that...I know that it's a little messed up but hey...I know who the poem's for and what it's about and it is cool!
Hahahaha...Not even you alex would be able to guess who and what it is about!

[This message has been edited by Pollita (10-31-2002 06:55 AM).]

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

1 posted 2002-10-31 08:04 AM

Hey

I really like the hidden message thing, but isn't that sometimes what its all about? I dunno. This had some really good lines in it.And its weird to think hes always there huh? Great job.

ri

~*I'm not gonna say I'm gorgeous, that for you to decide, if you really wanna know me, see the world through my eyes*~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-10-31 03:03 PM

I like the little secret meaning thing that you gave to the poem...i think it makes it unique! I on the other hand am not too clever at the moment to figure all of those secret meanings out tho lol so i'll trust that once you do it makes complete sense

I liked it a lot..great read!

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

3 posted 2002-10-31 04:41 PM

AH THANK YOU ALL!....
Yup it makes PERFECT sense if you know what im talking about!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....
Yup it's sure different!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-11-05 01:57 PM

Pollita~
This is VERY well written.
I drew my own meaning and interpretation from
this, and I really enjoyed it very much!
I'd have to say that this is my favorite that
I've read from you so far.
Keep up the great work.
~Vicky

P.S. Don't forget to check out Teen Challenge #2!
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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