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dinky
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since 2002-10-19
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0 posted 2002-10-27 10:24 PM


i heard the other day
what other people would say
i just wanted to cry
i almost thought i might die,
i stopped myself,
and thought
look at all the popularity they bought,
their shoes, their hair
they're everywhere
but now i know,
that i dont have to cry,
i just have to know who i am
so why dont i?

© Copyright 2002 samantha rae - All Rights Reserved
Surreal
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since 2002-10-21
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Paris
1 posted 2002-10-28 07:01 AM


So very, very true.  Inspiring words

Glory is a silent thing-- Mineral

foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
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Wonderland
2 posted 2002-10-28 08:27 AM


Liked it man liked it
clumsy
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since 2002-10-10
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canada.
3 posted 2002-10-28 10:20 AM


it's always hard to know who you are. you think you know and then some one goes and kicks you in the a.ss
good poem though.

foreverwithyou
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Wonderland
4 posted 2002-10-28 05:34 PM


like this one I think it is my favorite of all

foreverwithyou
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Wonderland
5 posted 2002-10-28 05:35 PM


yes yes i know that i replied twice but the second one was to tell u that I figured out that it was my favorite one!and now u have even more replys so whuts the matter with that?LOL NUTTIN THATS WHUT!!!:-P
devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

6 posted 2002-10-28 09:23 PM


Sam,
   I really liked this one. I know that it is my fav right now. I am at such a low right now. Wo0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o. I am really mad at myself and ppl. Tony wont stop talkin to me. Have you heard of Good Charlotte? They r really good. I just got their cd today and it is really good. U might like them. Rockers. LOL. I have Fat Hed in my group for dancin in gym and i think i am gonna kill myself cause he is really annoyin me.OMG. I am havin a bad day. NO bad month. NO bad year. NOO NOO NO make that bad life. I am gonna ask dj somethin tomorrow....Make sure your shoulder is free cause i may need it to cry on for the 6th time this year..
            *Allison*
                 P.S.
                     Sorry its so long.

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
7 posted 2002-10-28 09:56 PM


Tears for show is, I agree, a complete bitch. I liked the way you ended this. thanks for sharing

Are you scared?                        BOO! Are you now?

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
8 posted 2002-11-02 10:34 PM


No Allison- Sam can't like Good Charlotte.
lol, sam, lol!

Yea, i like this one too..
i like the title too, cuz it says sucks. lol
nanners!

Good write tho man.. i hate people with pretty hair, and i hate people with cooler shoes than me, which is pretty much everyone, being i wear BOWLING SHOES.
god.. i was j/j tho- i like my gay hair and gay shoes.
Even though it doesn't fit my un-gay ness... yea.. well.. um.. good poem- u know where this belongs?
No- not only in the "best use of the alphabet" book, but in my private library as well!
toodles~
lol
~SARA

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