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dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

0 posted 2002-10-19 05:54 PM

i hate it here in this backstabbing place
everyone here is a big disgrace
they say one thing to your face
but when your home all alone
its a whole different tone
they diss you
and then you end up cryin with a tissue
i cant understand why so many people are like this
sometimes it just gets me so pissed

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2002-10-19 05:56 PM

i didnt no if i should post it cuz i wasnt sure if it was done but i posted it anywayz cuz i thught it would be ok like it is

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2002-10-19 05:58 PM

Hey, I'm loving this... thanks for your reply to my poem, I was worried nobody would take the time to read the whole thing...

I like how your poetry seems to be almost like rap, but is written much better than I would expect most rap music to be.

One thing I feel I should mention - make sure you don't post too many of your poems at a time, or people will give them a more sparse response...

If you space out your postings by a few days at a time, you'll find each one will get many, many more replies and a bigger overall response.

I liked this poem quite a bit. Great work.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

3 posted 2002-10-19 05:58 PM

lol
this made me laugh.
But not in a bad way.
IT reminds me of something Marshall would say, that's all... except no "yo".. darn.

Great write, great write.
Keep posting.

"Close your eyes and begin to breathe..
Something's coming over me.
Lust to find and a soul to keep.
Because you love me.."

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

4 posted 2002-10-19 06:01 PM

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
he always beats me...

IT's not fair!!!
and the FREAKY thing is, we post pratically the same thing.. ugh.

lolololol!!!
Mike licked my finger...

Andy said he loved me...

I've had a good week-lol

"Close your eyes and begin to breathe..
Something's coming over me.
Lust to find and a soul to keep.
Because you love me.."

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

5 posted 2002-10-19 07:54 PM

Sam-
This is really good! I`m impressed. I never knew that quiet girl that is my best friend had all of that in her! Good job!

Baby_Angel123
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

6 posted 2002-10-19 08:27 PM

Hey I loved ya poem. I know just how you feel! I just wish that life could be different. Keep up the good work.

~Angel~

Live Life it it's fullest and if ya got something to say, ya better say it right now, cuz you may not have another day!

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

7 posted 2002-10-19 11:13 PM

* laughs at Brian * hehe there ya go brian!!!!!!!!!
Great job

Riley Leanne Grant

~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2002-10-21 10:23 AM

I thought it was pretty good. Hypocrits are everywhere, just be cool about it. Nothing is going to change. All you can do is accept it and be better than they are.

This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'.

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

9 posted 2002-10-21 10:00 PM

Hey liked this one too!Keep writing!

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