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Teen Poetry #6

Realization

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-08-21 11:01 PM

Your touch..
   Still lingering on my skin.

Your kiss..
   Still burning my lips.

So many things I miss about you,
It would take a lifetime to name them all.
It feels like forever,
waiting for the call,
that will say,
whether or not,
you still love me,
as much as my soul needs you.
I was afraid before,
but now I will not allow myself,
to be afraid...anymore.

Your voice..
   Still whispering in my ear.

Your love..
   Still captivating my heart.

"It's the way that he makes you feel.
It's the way that he kisses you.
It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

1 posted 2003-08-22 12:02 PM

hey great poem, I really liked it

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-08-22 02:20 PM

I like it...very sad, but very good.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

sixington
Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 53
Utah

3 posted 2003-08-23 12:05 PM

I love how you start and end. nice write! ~ Amanda

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2003-08-24 09:06 PM

Thanks everyone, I'm glad you liked this, this was a hard subject to write about for me since I don't usually write about this kinda thing...But thanks!

"It's the way that he makes you feel.
It's the way that he kisses you.
It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult

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