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Teen Poetry #6

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Imajica
Junior Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 14
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-09-16 08:07 PM

Maybe the trees will fall
Every river, lake and river flood
Evry building collapse
And maybe you'll leave
And everything will fall apart
Starting with me

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-09-17 01:20 PM

This is intriguing. Short poetry has the charm of allowing you to read it a few times over, just to try and absorb its full impact.

Nice work.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

2 posted 2002-09-17 03:07 PM

Howdy! I loved this, it's really effective without being over self-pitying. Good work, hope to hear more like this!
EleanorMoonbaby *)

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Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-09-17 09:30 PM

Interesting. I must say that I like it.

I have a lizard, and his name is Jake.

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