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A.L
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 131


0 posted 2003-07-23 02:16 AM




...Bringing me back...

I've come so far only to find I'm back where it all began,
Never knowing what to expect makes it harder to understand,
Realizing what I have to except these feelings will never leave,
It didn't take me long to find that nothing is what it seems...

Picking up what I left behind to start all over again,
Taking another step back to what will never end,
Looking back to missed chances only to find whats missing now,
Waiting for someone to find me and make it right somehow...

I'm stuck in the middle of this never ending battle with myself,
If you'd only hate me long enough, hating you could only help,
What does it take to let go of what never seems to leave,
Always picking up from where we left off adding another missing peice...

Pushing so hard at something that never seems to fit,
Whats wrong seems so right, yea we've seen all of it,
I don't want to be there anymore, but something always brings me back,
to the place where we left off from before, where we think this time it'll last...

When every beginnings end turns out to be the same,
As I push another one away and find only your to blame,
Looking at him only to hear all that you have said,
I can't feel anything from anyone else with you lost in my head...

I get only so far until all that I do comes undone,
Starting from the end of the mistake the beginning ever came from,
Bringing me back to that place only to bring me down again,
Misplaced another peice of you to this heart that will never mend...

© Copyright 2003 Alison - All Rights Reserved
dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-07-24 12:59 PM


i commend you for such an excellent write.  it spoke volumes unto my heart.
teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
2 posted 2003-07-24 10:54 AM


That was very wonderfully written even if it is unhappy.  I think I can halfway understand how you feel.  Part of the reason why I cut myself off.

The future isn't now, that was yesterday.

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