ok..then will you read this 1?

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Teen Poetry #6

ok..then will you read this 1?

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

0 posted 2003-07-16 08:32 PM

every time we get close i dont know where to start
how i can tell you about the love in my heart
i cant figure it out, i dont know what to say
all i can tell you is im here to stay
life without you doesnt mean a thing
you just dont know how much joy you bring
just whisper to me in my ear
cuz i love you is what i want to hear

Remember this advice: Hate is only reserved for those we truly love, and dont eat boogers!

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-07-17 03:00 AM

Yes I will...and so will everyone else..haha

Another great write!

Just give it time and don't get discouraged. I think I posted quite a few before I started getting responses and forging friendships. We are a friendly bunch, and we try to take it all in...but whew! There's alot of wonderful stuff here!

Ladybug
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 236
Massachusetts

2 posted 2003-07-17 10:26 AM

Hey Chika, very cool poem. Reminds me of a few I wrote as a teenager. Glad to see someone else from MA, hee hee

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-07-17 12:50 PM

nice write, and i love the quote. haha

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