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Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2003-07-13 10:48 PM


For years I thought my happy place
was inside a big pumpkin or under a see-saw
or with the soap at the grocery store
or inside the print of a blue tiger's paw
but now I see where it is
and its not in a pumpkin or in a big shoe
I know exactly where it is today
and its right beside you.


-Stinky Twinkie has a happy place...but knock before you come visiting-


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lingering thoughts
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 70
Illinois, USA
1 posted 2003-07-14 12:40 PM


awww i like it ... its cute
ill be watching for more of yours
CaSSandra

Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
2 posted 2003-07-14 01:48 AM


i would have to say awww also i liked this
i really like how you show that you found comfort in fairy tails and for something i could say bad about you hummmmm your a little childish but arn't we all.keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
3 posted 2003-07-14 09:19 PM


Wow...  Something almost serious from Sir Stinky Twinkie...  Could it be?!     I liked this.  Thanks for sharing.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

BrokenDreams
Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
4 posted 2003-07-14 10:53 PM


I'm glad you have a happy place, and from the sound of it, someone to share it with you.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

collarbone_girl
Junior Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 45
Wonderland
5 posted 2003-07-15 08:29 AM


you suck bad, real bad. no, this was really good! i like the shortness (is that a word?) of it, it really puts across a happy mood. yay for yoU!

this cool noght air is curious...

frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23
Posts 268
my own special world
6 posted 2003-07-15 10:28 AM


I really liked that one too, it goes from being a young child to a teen who understands more I think, nice work!

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

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