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Teen Poetry #6

Another day

lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2003-06-29 11:01 PM

I want to start another day
where nothing blocks my view
clear my mind
each thought of mine is new
look towards my future
what is to come
rather than dwelling in the past

I want to live and laugh
without pain eating me alive
live my life
the way it used to be
before it hurt inside
walk away
ignore the thoughts that used to be

I found a way to start another day
a way to live and laugh
lose the person that once was mine
find another
not to fill a void
not to change the past
but find a love greater than the last

hey everyone! I havent wrote in a while ... nothing has come to mind bad enough to write about LOL*(*writers block*!), so tell me what you think !!!

CaSSandra*

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-06-29 11:29 PM

I really really love this one, Im sure alot of people can relate, including me.
I love the line, "I want to live and laugh without pain eating me alive."
Well done!
Another for my library.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

ShadyMakaveli
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 128

2 posted 2003-06-30 01:13 PM

Good write, very relatable, keep up the good work.

frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

3 posted 2003-06-30 02:14 PM

Very Inspirational, could never tell that you were coming off writers block with that one

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

infinite disaster
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

4 posted 2003-06-30 02:27 PM

hey cassie!!! YAY! i like that one! i haven't been able to write either and that's really good! unlike what i have been trying out. good job!
much love, akie.

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