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Teen Poetry #6

ill always go back 2 him

gorJess
Junior Member

since 2003-03-24

Posts 15
new zealand

0 posted 2003-06-18 06:06 AM

some people tell me that your not my kind
and i belive them but i cant get you off my mind
some people tell me that i should stay away
maybe i will some other day
cos it feels right and it feels good
and i dont always do what i should
and i know what makes me happy
and in my heart your it exactly
i dont want to do right, i just want you 2night
not just only in my dreams
save my best behaviour for a little later cos im only 16
that ive made my mind up, i got time to grow up
face responsibility living in the moment
keeping my heart open while im only 16
ill learn my lessons and ill make mistakes
and if i get burned itll be my heart to break
it isnt easy hearing what they say
sometimes you ve got to take a leap of faith
cos it feels right and it feels good
and im not going to do somets stupid
just this once i want to feel like i can do what i want when i hold tight
anyone whos ever been in love has got to know
what it means to have a dream
and no one can say anothing to change my mind...
not this time

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

1 posted 2003-06-18 03:06 PM

This piece was very compelling and interesting. It's a shame that nobody else here read this before I, but none-the-less...I liked this.

I especially liked this line:
"save my best behaviour for a little later cos im only 16"

I don't know why, but that was...I don't know how to explain it, lol.

Keep posting.

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