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Stinky Twinkie
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Dinwiddie

0 posted 2003-06-07 05:51 PM


The other day I woke up
and I went to feed the dog.
I looked around and saw
some pasta on a log.
I jumped over the wooden thing
in the middle of my jog.
After I landed on the ground,
I fell on a big hog.
In the dog pen, there was some
spaghetti hidden in the fog.


-Stinky Twinkie says this sucks. You should too.-

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Riding
1 posted 2003-06-07 06:12 PM


...
this
is
beautiful
...

(yes I'm twisted, but i still say it's beautiful)

LegalSecret69
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since 2003-06-04
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2 posted 2003-06-07 11:29 PM


Travis...this was just great. I feel like I was there as you wrote every word.. hahaha *wink*  Good job kiddo!!!
lingering thoughts
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since 2003-05-03
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3 posted 2003-06-24 10:06 PM


LOL ... you have very funny poems that dont really make sense ! but i guess thats what makes me laugh... good job ! ill be readn more of yours
CaSSandra

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