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i won't run away.
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i won't run away. |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
will you stop pretending that i'll run away, let me take your swollen hand and save you from yourself your putting barriers inbetween us making me hurt like you never have before graveyard kisses aren't the way they used to be when beautiful blood stained tears fall into my hand i like the way it sounds when i strum those broken guitar strings my mouth can barely sing your name and, lips will never get the chance to tell that magical dream once again i fall for you truth. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
WoW, this is an extremely well written and saddening peice, keep on writing this excellent work and thanks for sharing  Andrew |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Some of the imagery here is a little dark... you did a good job of making your feelings become visual. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
weeeeeuuuuuu! |
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