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The Ring
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The Ring |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE 
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Showers of affection Seem to soak you head to toe Leaving you sopping Across my brand new beige carpet With a trail following right behind you Making your deed visible Scents of flowers and pretty things Stain your buttoned white shirt The air scatters it everywhere Up the stairs, into our bedroom Tainting everything it touches With something deceitful Your touch is now ice Freezing me in your embrace Your heart is black, your soul is empty I no longer exist to you Now the only thing that joins us Is the ring I still wear* "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
Tainting everything it touches With something deceitful nice job i really liked these lines i think it added a lot to the poem ... keep writing ! *Cassandra |
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