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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
Hey guys! I haven't posted in a while cuz I had somehow "lost" my muse for a while, but I have found my writing "muse" again, so here is a new one for you. ----------------------------------------- Fine on the outside, And crying inside Deep in my heart of hearts I will never get over you. Love that wasn't through, Just squelched by you Going on day by day, You don't notice How unhappy you've made me. Why don't you love me? Is it truly that hard? Do you even care? Living with all this Bottled up inside, Is just tearing me apart But how can I tell you? I guess I shall remain, Just the same. Fine on the outside And crying inside. ------------------------------------- I hope you liked it, but tell me what you think. It is good to be back. |
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xxshadowxx Junior Member
since 2003-05-17
Posts 43Texas |
Hey I loved your poem. It was really good. Keep up the great work! ~Carrie~ "Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me" |
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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
Thank you Carrie. I appreciate the kind words. I haven't written in a while and it is nice to know that you liked the poem. |
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