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Fighting Temptation
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Fighting Temptation |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
l know it's over-commaed, but it doesn't seem to work any other way.. lol heck, commaed to death...! Fighting death's temptation, refusing the lure of a razor, knowing the freedom of my soul won't do any good, l hang onto sanity by fingertips ragged, hope l've already lost the battle, cling to insanity with fingertips no longer ragged , tap out frustration so quick, knowing release comes only with death but seeking life insane instead, hoping words of pain and rage will help those with no reason to go on, perhaps tell them theres another with feelings like theirs, the same small fears and agonies, small rages the world will never see, for seeing is revealing, pretending they're all right, turning off the lights and crying late at night, when no one but l can see; l'll resist the lure of a razor, till time meets it's end, and help those without help to see, those l was once so like, until l found my strength. Just know l'll always yearn for freedom of my soul, until love finds my heart, and death has no temptation, and life always draws me nearer. until then, l'm gonna resist the idea of death, though l'll always fantasize about it, and hope that someone doesn't feel alone quite so badly, alright? laurie... btw, l'm not depressed. |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
hey loved it. ill listen to the advice in it. keep writing. "hugsnkises......lol" see u around. i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me. |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
yeah... that's good, sweeety. l'm glad u liked it... hehe laurie. |
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